Happy April Fool's Day!
Today is #sixsunday where published and non-published writers share six sentences from their work. I will share 6 sentences from my finished Work-In-Progress Time Changes Everything.
Every Sunday I think it gets harder and harder to choose just 6 lines. I cheated a bit and have 8 sentences. Shhhh. Don't tell anyone. Hopefully you enjoy today's pick.
To hell with it,
she thought, with kisses like that, what
could one night as Jake’s real date be like? It was time to find out.
She
cleared her throat, leaned into his muscular body, and wiped her lipstick off
his lips. “Not bad, smooth talker. But, you
may be in for a surprise tonight, too, Jake Edwards.” She walked ahead of him,
swaying her hips more than usual. After a few steps, she stopped, peaked across
her shoulder and said, “If you play your cards right.” She heard a growl behind
her as she moved towards the boat, feeling Jake’s eyes on her.
Great six... errr, eight, Melinda! :-) I really like the playfulness of this scene!
ReplyDeleteThanks Chantel! I like how Amanda gets the guts to finally do it!
DeleteFun, sexy snippet! I'd like to see where it goes... You should sign up on the sixsunday.com site so others can find you... Sign up starts Tuesday evening for next Sunday...
ReplyDeleteTHanks for that advice. I will do that.
DeleteHa - great six-ish! So sexy and playful! I second Angela! P.S. I get how hard it is to limit to just six. Why do I use so many periods!??
ReplyDeleteSee you next Sunday!
Thanks Janey! I'll be reading yours again next Sunday!
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