Today is #sixsunday where published and non-published writers share six sentences from their work. I will share 6 sentences from my finished Work-In-Progress Time Changes Everything. It's mighty hard to pick out six sentences, but here it goes.
Jake looked at her and fire lit his eyes. “You’ve grown up, Mandy. You’ve turned into a beautiful woman instead of that awkward teenager. I guess time changes everything.”Amanda took a big sip of her drink. She smiled at his handsome face, remembering how in love she had been with him when they were growing up. “I don’t know, Jake, sometimes time stands still.”
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Aww! Good job working your title scene in there. I'm so loving your story!
ReplyDeleteThanks Chantel! I like it too. This is how Ch. 1 ends.
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