tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post3931839567702308346..comments2024-02-12T07:55:41.602-06:00Comments on Melinda Dozier : Weekend Writing Warriors - WIP New York Minute #8SundayUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post-80609332374501669022013-03-11T12:01:22.848-06:002013-03-11T12:01:22.848-06:00Enjoyed the 8 from this week and last! Enjoyed the 8 from this week and last! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post-30447462057445066582013-03-10T18:19:42.617-06:002013-03-10T18:19:42.617-06:00I have felt exactly that way. You really captured ...I have felt exactly that way. You really captured the emotion. Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post-21992030045330408862013-03-10T17:52:06.909-06:002013-03-10T17:52:06.909-06:00Scary situation to find herself in. Dating is such...Scary situation to find herself in. Dating is such a shocker. Great eight.Kylie Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12266641348443886411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post-75540528922646466742013-03-10T16:04:46.256-06:002013-03-10T16:04:46.256-06:00Your building the tension week to week. Do it. Don...Your building the tension week to week. Do it. Don't do it. Do it. Don't do it. Can't wait to see where this goes.HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post-86154277293632998732013-03-10T16:03:18.344-06:002013-03-10T16:03:18.344-06:00Excellent. I can hardly wait to read more. In jus...Excellent. I can hardly wait to read more. In just a few sentences, you've done a great job of showing Veronica's insecurity as she compared herself to other women. Great way to get the reader to relate. Most of us have done that, I'm sure--compare ourselves to others--so sure we come up short. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post-86081597807553879032013-03-10T14:05:40.732-06:002013-03-10T14:05:40.732-06:00Too late now! Will be interesting to see how this ...Too late now! Will be interesting to see how this unfolds - excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post-55513436167580072392013-03-10T13:46:01.957-06:002013-03-10T13:46:01.957-06:00I can't imagine speed dating. It'll be in...I can't imagine speed dating. It'll be interesting how you handle this.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post-37687576588466250622013-03-10T11:49:12.431-06:002013-03-10T11:49:12.431-06:00Aww, hehe. I feel for her. Great snippet!Aww, hehe. I feel for her. Great snippet!Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post-49666411781403861432013-03-10T11:15:30.509-06:002013-03-10T11:15:30.509-06:00Oh, speed dating! Love that idea. Great 8!Oh, speed dating! Love that idea. Great 8!India Mastershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655550748159559852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post-11266655403838513422013-03-10T09:41:35.486-06:002013-03-10T09:41:35.486-06:00I don't blame her. Great job. I tweeted.I don't blame her. Great job. I tweeted.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871738939469153809.post-31678597887139990322013-03-10T09:24:44.490-06:002013-03-10T09:24:44.490-06:00Ahhh...I love a heroine who's afraid of speed ...Ahhh...I love a heroine who's afraid of speed dating. I wrote one myself. Can't wait to see what happens next.Shannyn Schroederhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01566837598762381432noreply@blogger.com